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I was just drawing a point commision for :iconpinkydoaka: and well, I started just with the body structure and realised that actually it's naked... and looking good, so, I just decided to upload it "half-done" since it looks so good, the non-nude version will be uploaded later today ;)

EDIT 2: Finnished version: [link]

EDIT: Damn Photoshop was being gay, idk even if I can finnish it at all later, but well, this one is done and all is working cept my logo is a bit chaotic since Photoshop kept crashing EVERYTIME I tried to edit it -_-
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Pinups can be really fun to draw and it looks like you had a lot of fun drawing this. A sexy lady in a dim lit room makes something about her very mysterious.

What I love about this piece are the slender legs and the details in the wallpaper. The legs are very feminine and I like the strong lines you put to define the right knee and her ankles. From what I can see in the toes, it is also very well done with lots of detail in the right areas. The wallpaper in the background is very interesting. I love the contrast between the purple and the yellow and the patterns is also very unique.

However, I believe that the upper part of her body, although a very good start with basic shapes, may still need some help. Going from top to bottom, starting with the head, her head is turned 3/4's to our right.

Usually as a rule of thumb, when the head is turned 3/4's any direction, this means we cannot see part of her face. I can see you did that with her ear however, this also means that one eye should apear closer than the other eye or, rather one eyes is bigger than the other. But I am very glad that you pointed the nose in the right direction, instead of the left, because she is facing right. Along with the eyes, the rule also goes with the lips: one side of the lip should be bigger than the other. The upper lip on the left side looks good but it the bottom lip should look bigger along with the upper lip.

Onto the hardest part that many people have trouble with: the breasts. Breasts should be though as water ballons filled with water rather than ballons filled with air. This is because breasts are fill with fat which means they droop. This will mean that cleavage won't appear with out something holding them together. Bold lines aren't really helpful with breast because it brings too much attention to them and makes them look less natural. I am not sure how you are trying to portray this figure though. With the background, it gives it more of an elegance to the piece but her breasts here take away the elegance. To give you more of an idea how breast fall, check out this tutorial: [link]
It was vert helpful to me.

As mentioned before, what are you trying to portray about this lady in this piece? Is she as elegant and mysterious I think she could be?

Again, this is a wonderful piece and anatomy and perspective is hard for anyone. Basic shapes are helpful tools but they don't do justice sometimes for bodies, especially S-curved lady bodies. Though, her legs do her much justice and the dim lighting is perfect for an intimate evening.

Keep up the good work!

-Marina
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rinatan-chu Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Was this done with a mouse? hm, not bad. Something I can't even do so much respect.
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BenioxoXox Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
yepp with mouse, but that's cause IDK how to use tablet, I used it for 4 years like 4 years back (I was 12 when I got tablet) but then after 4 years of trying and failing I went back to good ol' mouse and never gonna put my hands on tablet again.
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Ligarooq Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Good try but she's hotter than that, Man.
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BenioxoXox Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
yepp hands down, she's lookin' better than that ;)
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VeganREbel Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
no eyelids? and the upper lip looks swollen
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BenioxoXox Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
uhm, the eyelids are there, but they're not very much shadowed so it's not very obvious, and well, lips look swollen when they got lipstick on imo everytime, so I don't see it as a mistake really... thanks for the comment though ;)
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osmanpbs Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
mhhhhhhmmhmhmhmmhmmhmmmmmmmm
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BenioxoXox Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
lol you like it?
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osmanpbs Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
YESSHHHH...only the face is kinda ugly,but the rest is mhhhmmmmmm I am sttil staring at it!
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BenioxoXox Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
well, the face was based uppon :iconpinkydoaka:'s face...
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